How pro am i? Lol hahaha So I did this before on cassette! I so want to be a news reader. I did this exact same thing years ago but thought I'd try it again! :)
Well done Rachel. That was very good. Very clear and confident - story always moving forward so I was engaged to listen. Good high centre of gravity so you had a good authority and I therefore felt I SHOULD listen to you. And VERY confident. Excellent.
Only twice did you mis-pronounce words so that they didn't make sense. That's a listening (to yourself issue). They may have been typos but even so we need to listen so we always make sense. Not big issues though - BUT that's the next step.
Top stuff!! Liked your effort to present it as a news bulletin. It was interesting to compare your delivery against the other reporters. You scrubbed up OK. Well done'.
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Date: 2006-08-10 11:50 am (UTC)Only twice did you mis-pronounce words so that they didn't make sense. That's a listening (to yourself issue). They may have been typos but even so we need to listen so we always make sense. Not big issues though - BUT that's the next step.
Top stuff!! Liked your effort to present it as a news bulletin. It was interesting to compare your delivery against the other reporters. You scrubbed up OK. Well done'.
Richard.